“In black ink my love may still shine bright.”― William Shakespeare
Those
prolonged nights, invincible thus far
Cometh
grow’st by the cloven of ‘We’.
Thou
being mine and the world purely our(s)
With
each trice spent when enamored of thee.
Deliciate
thou whisper sweet nothings
Snuggled
with glee, bonded, never forgo.
Love
inscrib’d as forever engravings
Sorry
but to see ye yearn ember blow.
Lurking
in shadow, thy return it craves
This
canst be verge of mine in thine play.
O Wil
Shakespeare, though unparall’d thou staves
But
lov’st of mine be impalpable all way.
Divine
my love, will bring back salvation
With
thy flow, booz’d unto destination.
The Love in Your Heart wasn't put there to stay,
Love isn't Love till You give it Away..

.................."it craves" ..
ReplyDeletecrave is a crucial part of hope...
"But lov’st of mine be impalpable all way"
this line creates a sudden hiatus..
gave u a pause to think a little more deeply
narrations are quite pretty...
Seems like you have already analyzed the entire composition...thanks for spending tym!!
ReplyDeletethat comment is surely worth an inspiration...thanQ...:)
ReplyDeleteamazing words..
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hmmm.....stuff yourself up you are going to quill some enigmatic notions for me i hope i'm understood...its just bcz i found u better in these British expressionzz of poetism than me:(..........
ReplyDeletem always there fr help/...tu bs goal complete kr..hope m understood!! haha
ReplyDeletethanks Zubin...just checkd ur link...lovd ur clicks..!! carry on..!!
ReplyDeleteIntense poetry that was ! you write exceptionally well !
ReplyDeleteThanks Maliny for that stupefying compliment....:)
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thanks buddy...:)
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ReplyDeleteCongrats! Keep up the good work :)
Lovely.
ReplyDeleteBut I wonder why you had to use the Old English words like thou and ye.
very nice one
ReplyDeletethanQ...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sir..
ReplyDeleteThe major reason for using Old English is the feel of the language. I feel it really poetic. Moreover, Shakespeare's sonnets were the one that inspired me for sonnets..just a kind of guru-dakshina or something...:)
Thanks Sudha! Its my first Liebster..and m honored to receive it from u! and congrats to u too!!!
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m taking ur words as and nasty criticism and
its emphasis my emotions towards the my project"
Beutiful poem. I am still to get over the hang over i induced through this poem. Write a plenty...
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